Sour Apple (Dresden RPG, Discussion Thread)

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Re: Sour Apple (Dresden RPG, Discussion Thread)

Postby Fallout_Monkey » Sat Jun 23, 2018 2:41 am

Liking what I'm seeing. Good stuff. couple of typos in your first post I noticed
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Re: Sour Apple (Dresden RPG, Discussion Thread)

Postby DistinctlyBenign » Sat Jun 23, 2018 8:35 am

:oops:

I'll fix them when I make my next post, it'll probably be a couple hours.
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Re: Sour Apple (Dresden RPG, Discussion Thread)

Postby Flession » Sat Jun 23, 2018 4:44 pm

DistinctlyBenign wrote:People come in and record personal ads for themselves and then other people can come in a rent those videos, to figure out who to date. It's the way of the future if you ask me...


I hope she hasn't put too much money down on it...
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Re: Sour Apple (Dresden RPG, Discussion Thread)

Postby DistinctlyBenign » Sat Jun 23, 2018 5:06 pm

Idk man, tinder is just a fad, this video dating thing is gonna make a comeback.
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Re: Sour Apple (Dresden RPG, Discussion Thread)

Postby DistinctlyBenign » Sun Jun 24, 2018 8:23 am

So based on that last interaction I think Mariyta may have misread Adam's internal monologue as dialogue. Not an issue, really, but just pointing it out as something to take note of in the future.
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Re: Sour Apple (Dresden RPG, Discussion Thread)

Postby Flession » Sun Jun 24, 2018 12:14 pm

Yup, but I can roll with the punches.

Get it? Boxer? Punching?
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Re: Sour Apple (Dresden RPG, Discussion Thread)

Postby Fallout_Monkey » Sun Jun 24, 2018 12:47 pm

Flession wrote:Yup, but I can roll with the punches.

Get it? Boxer? Punching?


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Re: Sour Apple (Dresden RPG, Discussion Thread)

Postby Fallout_Monkey » Sun Jun 24, 2018 12:55 pm

DistinctlyBenign wrote:So based on that last interaction I think Mariyta may have misread Adam's internal monologue as dialogue. Not an issue, really, but just pointing it out as something to take note of in the future.


maybe we should use italics or a different color for internal monalogues
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Re: Sour Apple (Dresden RPG, Discussion Thread)

Postby Flession » Sun Jun 24, 2018 3:11 pm

It wasn't per say internal monologue, but moreso descriptive text of Adam's perspective.
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Re: Sour Apple (Dresden RPG, Discussion Thread)

Postby DistinctlyBenign » Sun Jun 24, 2018 3:55 pm

If it becomes an issue we could do text colors or something but I think it's fine for now.

Unless Flession or Mariyta have anything else they want to do in this scene I think we're pretty much through it. If neither of them has anything to add in the new few hours I'll make an closing post with Candice setting up a meeting time for them then move on to the next intro.

I still have not gotten a PM from Fridrik so unless that arrives before I get back to make the post the next intro will be Liam and Morgan.
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