For those new to Writer's guild (or visitors who are not a member of our little group for one reason or another), I have mainly been asking for help on a script I am writing under the working title of "Oz War"
The Elevator Pitch: An American McGee-esque Wizard of Oz
The Concept: After a car accident, a girl struggles for her life in a coma while her mind takes her though a dark and twisted version of the Wizard of Oz where her and her four companions become entangled in the war between the four elemental witches and the technological Wizard.
The Script Links (Google Docs)Scenes 1 thru 3Scenes 4 & 5Scenes 6 & 7Scene 8Scene 9Scenes 10 & 11AScenes 11B & 12Scenes 13 & 14AScene 14B
Authors is looking for advice/thoughts on:
Anything you have to say but particularly the following areas:
-- The bridge scene in Scene 7 (There may be some changes to that scene coming soon)
-- The ambush in Scene 14b
-- The characterization of Zeta, Jessica, Kemen, and Crow
An outstanding feat for a fellow cleric to the Wall of Text.
this shit is like a shark, if it stops swimming, it dies.