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 Welcome to Action Castle! 
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Red Boba Fett
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Post Re: Welcome to Action Castle!
Eyes blinking, you emerge into a large room with a vaulted ceiling. It's the treasure trove of ACTION CASTLE! A huge dragon is here, slumbering atop a treasure pile.

You find yourself somewhere underneath the castle. Light filters in from an opening to the north. A dark tunnel leads off to the north. You hear a deep, rumbling sound from the south. to the east you see flickering lights through a hole in the wall. There is a skeleton here.

Exits are: South, enter hole, enter tunnel

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Sun Oct 23, 2011 1:06 pm
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Post Re: Welcome to Action Castle!
enter hole

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Let me see if I got this straight....
You want me to go into the dark cave with my 3 foot sword, and fight a 40 foot dragon....
Is that about right?


Sun Oct 23, 2011 1:17 pm
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Red Boba Fett
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Post Re: Welcome to Action Castle!
Um, okay, that was a total fail on my part. I just woke up; sorry.

Let's try that again:

Eyes blinking, you emerge into a large room with a vaulted ceiling. It's the treasure trove of ACTION CASTLE! A huge dragon is here, slumbering atop a treasure pile.

Exits are: North

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Sun Oct 23, 2011 1:24 pm
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Post Re: Welcome to Action Castle!
north

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Let me see if I got this straight....
You want me to go into the dark cave with my 3 foot sword, and fight a 40 foot dragon....
Is that about right?


Sun Oct 23, 2011 1:32 pm
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Red Boba Fett
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Post Re: Welcome to Action Castle!
You find yourself somewhere underneath the castle. Light filters in from an opening to the north. A dark tunnel leads off to the north. You hear a deep, rumbling sound from the south. to the east you see flickering lights through a hole in the wall. There is a skeleton here.

Exits are: South, enter hole, enter tunnel

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Sun Oct 23, 2011 1:37 pm
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Post Re: Welcome to Action Castle!
enter hole

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Let me see if I got this straight....
You want me to go into the dark cave with my 3 foot sword, and fight a 40 foot dragon....
Is that about right?


Sun Oct 23, 2011 1:41 pm
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Post Re: Welcome to Action Castle!
You are in the dungeon. Torches flicker high above, casting sinister shadows, and a twisting staircase leads up. You see a hole dug into the wall of one of the cells.

Exits are: Up, enter hole

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Sun Oct 23, 2011 1:43 pm
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Post Re: Welcome to Action Castle!
enter hole

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Let me see if I got this straight....
You want me to go into the dark cave with my 3 foot sword, and fight a 40 foot dragon....
Is that about right?


Sun Oct 23, 2011 1:44 pm
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Red Boba Fett
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Post Re: Welcome to Action Castle!
You find yourself somewhere underneath the castle. Light filters in from an opening to the north. A dark tunnel leads off to the north. You hear a deep, rumbling sound from the south. to the east you see flickering lights through a hole in the wall. There is a skeleton here.

Exits are: South, enter hole, enter tunnel

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Sun Oct 23, 2011 2:12 pm
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Post Re: Welcome to Action Castle!
enter tunnel

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Let me see if I got this straight....
You want me to go into the dark cave with my 3 foot sword, and fight a 40 foot dragon....
Is that about right?


Sun Oct 23, 2011 2:33 pm
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