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Wayne found a site that was doing a contest for a 100 word story. These are all over the internet so whatever but it got Wayne and I talking about the concept of a 100 word story. Can people make one that is self contained, can they make one that isn't just a pitch for a larger story, can they make one that isn't this tiny slice of life but says something about the character or story. While we were talking I typed one out and I though I would throw it up here for you guys to comment on and ask for you (yes, YOU!) to share your 100 word or less stories.

Please be honest with any criticisms and I would also warn you that there is some animal cruelty in it and a *gasp* sentence fragment. I like the sentence fragment.

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The man came home to the smell of rotting food. That happens when you travel the country. His ex’s were always telling him to empty out the fridge before he left but the thought of throwing out food seemed wasteful to him. Throwing out rotting food was just that, throwing out rotting food. As he strolled into his kitchen it was the rust colored blood that made him pause 1st. The pieces of his chopped up dog took a little longer to sink into his mind. His smashed window, his dog and the racist message on the wall. Welcome home.

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Mon Sep 27, 2010 4:34 pm
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If he was traveling the country, who was supposed to be taking care of his dog?

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And why did they let that happen?

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A fellowship, united by happenstance, arrived by boat. They readied themselves for a reckless run across several dozen city blocks, with flickering hope stretching the horizon, distrust growing within them. Armed inadequately, they limped and scurried through empty cafes and homes, desperately escaping notice; the few times they failed, their tenuous partnership was found well-placed. They could not stop to eat, or sleep, lest they be overtaken. Only one had the courage – or the fear – to speak of what fate would bestow upon them just around the next corner. Then the fucking tank punched Coach off the bridge.

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A fellowship, united by happenstance, arrived by boat. They readied themselves for a reckless run across several dozen city blocks, with flickering hope stretching the horizon, distrust growing within them. Armed inadequately, they limped and scurried through empty cafes and homes, desperately escaping notice; the few times they failed, their tenuous partnership was found well-placed. They could not stop to eat, or sleep, lest they be overtaken. Only one had the courage – or the fear – to speak of what fate would bestow upon them just around the next corner. Then the fucking tank punched Coach off the bridge.

Well played sir, well played.

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I also wonder why he'd leave the dog alone because even if he hired a pet sitter I doubt there'd be much time for the corpse to putrefy before the sitter got there and notified the police. Other than that I like it.

Now I want to do one, here we go
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He gripped the shaft of his spear firmly in one hand, the other nervously clutching at the grass below him. Just a little more patience and perhaps the wait would be rewarded. In all likelihood it wouldn’t be; he’d just end up with more scraped skin and broken ribs but for the mere chance of success such minor pains were nothing compared to the reward. He glanced nervously at the men around him and saw his own apprehension mirrored on their faces; it was very possible that one of them would not be returning home. The cost of hunting mammoths.

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Here's mine:

The sword glinted in the flickering light. What seemed ages ago, men and monsters had fallen before its blade, and a kingdom had been forged where only chaos had been before. Now, however, it merely glinted in the darkness, its work complete. The light grew brighter as the flames that surrounded the sword grew in intensity. Something below gave way and the sword tumbled into the inky void. And so at long last, Excalibur returned to the lake. The sword was home.

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Well, here's me, jumping on the bandwagon.

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He, Jacob. She, Isabella. Families royal, wealthy, and connected. But Isabella was promised to another, Franco, and neither her fathers will nor fiances’ desire would be turned aside for the foolish love, blossomed, between the two. Each, secret counselors sought; dire words heard; dire words heeded. A ruse to win their freedom; love’s sojourn. A spy in their midst! Plan ruined, and lovers separated to their fates, alone. He to war, she to Franco’s bed. Deceit cannot sunder what stars have decreed, except to the harm of all. Jacob lost in battle; Isabella will bear no child. All is lost.

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Midnight dash through the empty city; taxi careening corners loses a hubcap. Bone white shells rise on either side, bleached by mercury lamps and the blue blackness they wear as a veil. Sounds echo strangely, uninvitingly, menacingly, from those places set aside for loosed wraps, trash, and plastic bags. Heart pounding, pounding with the tick of the watch; moments sliding by like lampposts, parking meters, traffic signs. Only moments left before the gate snaps shut, leaving the driver trapped in the endless city. Lost forever in empty babylon of bone facades & dark shadows. Stamp the pedal. Might. Just. Make. it.

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