What kinds of revisions do we want for the Beer Stein menace? Do we have it all compiled?

The overview of the Beer Hall Menace is that the nascent Nazi Party is trying to get Karl to join them. He turns them down. In an attempt to force compliance they kidnap his mother. Karl & team rescue her an thwart their plans.

I wrote something for that. Has it been collected?

You can put the edits into http://sotc-ftb.wikispaces.com/Karl+Stein+%26+the+Rise+of+the+Beer+Hall+Menace
This site will act as the book page for you, I suggest you each write in different colors.
Also check out the timeline page to get a gist of when things have happened

Was something wrong with what was already posted?

Maybe my post was the offender? I misunderstood and framed it as being during WWI rather than an early 30's prelude to WWII.

Still looking for it. Did you post it here? What page?

This was on page 9

"Karl Stein & the Rise of the Beer Hall Menace

Phase 3:
As Karl and his family settled into their new lives old friends from his college and army days started to pay visits. They remembered his inventions and asked that he come to Munich to help with a new movement to restore Germany’s honor. When the request became a compulsion, he knew those that wore the red pins with the bent cross were not to be trusted. His best friend – now worst enemy, Hans Richter, kidnapped his mother forcing him to go to Munich in the attempt to rescue her.
Aspect 1: My Dear Family Aspect 2: My Friend, now My Nemesis"

A mutual contact put Karl in communication with the Velja Noc. Boyan disguised himself as an officer and eventually managed to get in to the holding facility where Karl's mother was taken. He seduced the woman in charge of the prison block and was foolish enough to try to enlist her aid in rescuing Karl's mother. Boyan confused the incoming soldiers long enough about his rank to get himself, Karl, and Karl's mother out before they realized what had happened.

Aspect 1: "Of course we can trust her. She's a redhead." Aspect 2: "Shoot him now!" "He doesn't have to shoot you now!"

That looks good.