VV I tried to leave it open ended, let me know if you need more or less or whatnot to work with, I'm just trying to get a feel for the game and how much narration is good for each post.

That work's, it's leaves V a good place to insert an obstacle or challenge like a grumpy bear, a washed out bridge, a pesky storm cloud, etc. Something that would present itself as a barrier to completing your goal of getting to town. Of course, it could also be an NPC like Smelly Nelly that happens to be going to town as well after winning a dung kicking contest.
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TAZ

didn't know if we were going to try and manage all stories until a main adventure arose, or just write intro's all around. however i went ahead with mine.

Looks good, but it's late here and I should be asleep; I'll sleep on it and post tomorrow.

So what happens now? do I wait for Sugar Rush? or do I post again?

I'm unsure as well sir, It seems it could go either way, I was going to wait for some direction.
Or I could just go I suppose...

Go for it my guy is just standing around confused right now.

Si senor!

Looks good so far, I see no reason just yet to call for a roll.

Sorry tom for got who my BFF was there you go